My Worst walking Day Ever

 

 W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

                                                                

    Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

                           

                               First Draft

                      

                     

                          My Worst walking day ever.

I was walking down the river bank with my family. My dad was horrified  because he saw the lions getting ready to get him and my family. I was feeling frightened because my dad was terrified that he smelt the lions. I heard the lions roaring at me because they wanted me for their delicious lunch.

I could taste the feeling in my mouth that I was going to be eaten, but I wasn’t. On my body I felt so crushed because I had a lot of scratches on my face and body because the lion had sharp claws. When I got caught by the hungry lions it was really scary and it was like ‘Bam’ because she jumped on me and scratched me.  Then I saw the crocodile, I saw his razor sharp teeth and it was really big and scary. The lions were really scary because I could see their eyes flashing at my eyes like they were going to eat me. They played tug of war with me.

So now I finally got out of the enormous battle of the Kruger and I now I’m finally free for once. I feel so happy because I am out and with my lovely family.  

My Animal Creator.

 

Rabratah

Habitat: Glaciers

Diet: Fish

Head: Rabbit’s ears are good for hearing. It’s nose is good for smelling it’s food.

Body: Polar bear

They are great swimmers, with partially webbed fore paws, and they can swim over 96 kilometers (60 miles) without resting.

Legs: Zebra

Zebras can run 64 km (40 mi) per hour.

Tail: Cheetah

Cheetah’s tail is long 60 - 84 cm

                                                                    

A trip to Orana park

 
A trip to Orana Park.

Yesterday on the 12th of may me and my class went to Orana park to learn about Adaptations. My favourite part was the giraffes because we get to feed them green leaf’s. The giraffes are yellow and brown and they have purple sunblock on their tongues because they get burned. Giraffes are tall and the have long tongues to grab the leafs. My second favourite part was the tigers because one of them was walking back and forwards and there color skin is orange and black stripes. 



   

Learning Goals 2016

Battle at Kruger National park Sequence.

                                  WALT: recall events in order.

	The herd of buffalo are walking along the river bank.
	A pride of  lions are resting in the sun
	The scary lions are getting ready to attack the calf.
	The lion is chasing the little calf.
	The lion’s got the little baby buffalo.
	The big crocodile snapped his teeth on the little calf.
	The mama and the daddy went to get all of the other buffaloes.
	The buffaloes are ganging up on the lions.
	The baby Buffalo is rescued by the herd of buffalo.