How to make a comic

W.A.L.T: read and find the appropriate information I am searching for.

This is my friend and my presentation about how to make a comic. We made it on a google drawing and we hope you find it interesting.   

DLO about Extravaganza

20 things that you should say more often.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_paYkDS7AD7ampJeGZrWFppWkE/view

This is a link of a video with my friend and I telling you 20 things that you should say more often. Hope you enjoy.

Moon DLO - Reading

1800's DLO - Reading

Going in secret room

Going in secret room

One day I had to stay at my grandma’s house. I like staying at my grandma’s house because I know she has a secret room. Her secret room has all the presents for Christmas and jewelry. I knew about the secret room because of my mum. I was happy. I went in the secret room and saw a bluebird in a cage. The bird was sleeping and I didn’t know my grandma had a bird.

I was afraid and scared. I still went in, but I quietly crawled in. My grandma had squeaky sounds when she walks and crawls on the floor. I made the noise and the bird woke up. The bird woke up and started banging on the cage to try get me but he couldn’t.

My legs were shaking and my hands were sweating as it was dripping on the floor. I ran out of the secret room without closing the door. I didn’t know I left the door opened because I was very scared. So I just left it.

My grandma came walking and calling out to me. When she was walking, she walked passed the opened door. She kept walking and sat down with popcorn and a drink in her hand. She put the popcorn down and spilt the drink, so she went and got a cloth.

She got a cloth and saw the door opened of the corner of her eyes. She closed the door and just went back and cleaned the mess up. She didn’t ask me if I went in the secret room, she just cleaned up. I was lucky to not get told off.

The mean birds

The mean birds

One fresh normal day, arrived a little bluebird on the electricity wire lines. The little bluebird arrived, and shook its fur to get comfortable, then another bluebird arrived and yawned the same time as he moved his arms, he yawned and hit the other bird in the face on accident and nearly at the eye. So he shoved him to the side and yelled at his face and stepped away.

Until another bird arrived when he stepped away and budget into to him and started an another argue again, so it’s going to repeat over and over again when other birds are going to arrive. They all were arguing and pushing and then finally this big different shaped bird came and stopped the arguing so it won’t go for long. Anyway the big bird waved at them in a very polite way. All the little birds got a fright, and there faces were huge. After they’re gotten a fright, they started making fun of him but all he wanted was friends.

When the big bird waved at the little birds, they moved away from him and talked in each other's ears about him. But he flew between them and they were heading down to the ground because the big bird was heavy. The little birds slid down to the big bird like they were cuddling him, but yet one little bird bit the big bird on its waist and he fell and hanged down with his feet still grabbed on the electricity wire lines.

The 2 little birds were peaking on the big birds toes so he can fall off, one little bird looked down and got scared because he saw that there going to blast off up into the sky, so that bird told the others. The others were freaking out when the bird told them, and they hurried and told the 2 birds to look down and they blast off into the sky when they stopped peaking.

After they blasting off, they were all not covered in fur so they were bold and un fury. When they were bold and un fury the big bird was laughing non stop, now the little birds were embarrassed and hid behind the big bird.

Telling the time

Hi this is my telling the time slide, I hope you enjoy. 

Persistent Pigeon's

Persistent Pigeon's

One day in a busy street, there were some yellow cute pigeons sitting in their nest jumping around. They all got tired from jumping around and felt hungry. One pigeon saw a delicious pink strawberry icing cupcake outside someone’s window, so that pigeon told the other pigeons.

1 pigeon followed the other pigeon that spotted the cupcake then the other pigeon was looking around and thinking that they're going to get told off by their mother, But the pigeon just went and followed the others.

The pigeons tried jumping and grabbing the cupcake but  it failed. The next idea that the pigeons going to use is standing on top of each other. They stood on to each other and walked towards the cupcake and they end up fall down and hurting there self.

Next they made there own seesaw so they can boost one pigeon up to the cupcake and two on the other side of the seesaw, but the pigeon crashed against the gutter and failed.

3 hours later...

The pigeon’s had no ideas left to get the cupcake, so they walked back to there nest and starved until there mother comes back with the food. There mother finally came back with the food and they were excited, the pigeon’s were excited when they saw there mother with some food but there was only one worm, so they were upset.