I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Anneleise this is a very good poem,I like how you described the cheetah. If you can next time can you put some more pictures please, other than that it's really good.
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good job keep up the great work
ReplyDeleteHi Anneleise this is a very good poem,I like how you described the cheetah. If you can next time can you put some more pictures please, other than that it's really good.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good post. but it is a bit plane, you could put a ending to the slide. but anyway good job.
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