Ruin
Once upon a time there was an old dirty jungly city called Heaven Nanosystems. They have lots of towers covered in prickly bushes and big trees. I’m here because I am on a mission to find this secret glass mirror before the dark side comes and steals it.
I pushed this big container off the tower and watched it fall down the deep far floor. I kicked the container open and I saw a glass mirror, the glass mirror might have all the information about me in it, so I used my hand to turn it on and I was right all the information was in there.
I looked up and heard something and it sounded like the dark side in there big rocket blaster and it was them. I started running to my motor bike and there they were above my head but I wasn’t worried because I know I can get away from them.
I was still running then I saw my motor bike at the end of the tunnel so I slide down and hopped on my motor bike and started driving down the motorway. While I was driving I looked back and saw their machine guns out and they were shooting bullets at me.
So I set one of my bombs out and threw it on the ground to make them blow up but it didn’t work, they were still alive so I threw one in a old dirty car and when they get closer the car will blow up and fly on to them but it didn’t work again.
I looked at the sign because I wanted to know where to go. I went into the tunnel but there were no trucks so I keep driving until they got closer. I continued driving as fast as I could, I saw the light at the end of the tunnel. I'm going to make it I thought to myself.
The end
This week for writing, I've been writing about this video called Ruin. I may have a lot of writing but I hope you like it.
This made me feel really proud of myself and made me feel really happy.
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