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Thursday, May 20, 2021

The Starfish Poem - Social Studies

 What is the main message of this poem? That even the smallest change can make a difference. 

Give evidence: The last sentence saying "it made a difference for that one"

Include an image:








THE  STARFISH  POEM

Once upon a time, there was a wise man 

who used to go to the ocean 

to do his writing. 

He had a habit of walking 

on the beach 

before he began his work. 

One day he was walking along 

the shore. 

As he looked down the beach, 

he saw a human 

figure moving like a dancer. 

He smiled to himself to think 

of someone who would 

dance to the day. 

So he began to walk faster 

to catch up. 

As he got closer, he saw 

that it was a young man 

and the young man wasn't dancing, 

but instead, he was reaching 

down to the shore, 

picking up something 

and very gently throwing it 

into the ocean. 

As he got closer he called out, 

"Good morning! What are you doing?" 

The young man paused, 

looked up and replied, 

"Throwing starfish in the ocean." 

"I guess I should have asked, 

why are you throwing starfish in the ocean?" 

"The sun is up and the tide is going out. 

And if I don't throw them in they'll die." 

"But, young man, don't you realize that 

there are miles and miles of beach 

and starfish all along with it. 

You can't possibly make a difference!" 

The young man listened politely. 

Then bent down, picked up another starfish 

and threw it into the sea, 

past the breaking waves and said- 

"It made a difference for that one."

4 comments:

  1. Hi Anneleise!
    Nice blogpost! I like that you even included the actual poem in your blog, it gives us readers an idea of the topic. I also like that you put a photo of a starfish on your blog, gives it a little bit of spice, you know?

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  2. Hey Annneleise,
    I really like how detailed your post is. I like how you included the whole Starfish poem in your post to expand your reader's knowledge background about the context of your post is about. What you could improve on is to maybe erase the unnecessary empty spaces between elements (but it's not necessary though). Other than that please put more information along your answers. Have a nice day.

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  3. Hello
    Nice blogpost, maybe add more information and an introduction.

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  4. Hi there Anneleise,
    I really like how detailed you made this blog post. All the information that you have included made it easy to understand the message of the Poem. Maybe you could add an introduction next time?
    Anyways, well done! :)

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