What is the main message of this poem? That even the smallest change can make a difference.
Give evidence: The last sentence saying "it made a difference for that one"
Include an image:
THE STARFISH POEM
Once upon a time, there was a wise man
who used to go to the ocean
to do his writing.
He had a habit of walking
on the beach
before he began his work.
One day he was walking along
the shore.
As he looked down the beach,
he saw a human
figure moving like a dancer.
He smiled to himself to think
of someone who would
dance to the day.
So he began to walk faster
to catch up.
As he got closer, he saw
that it was a young man
and the young man wasn't dancing,
but instead, he was reaching
down to the shore,
picking up something
and very gently throwing it
into the ocean.
As he got closer he called out,
"Good morning! What are you doing?"
The young man paused,
looked up and replied,
"Throwing starfish in the ocean."
"I guess I should have asked,
why are you throwing starfish in the ocean?"
"The sun is up and the tide is going out.
And if I don't throw them in they'll die."
"But, young man, don't you realize that
there are miles and miles of beach
and starfish all along with it.
You can't possibly make a difference!"
The young man listened politely.
Then bent down, picked up another starfish
and threw it into the sea,
past the breaking waves and said-
"It made a difference for that one."
Hi Anneleise!
ReplyDeleteNice blogpost! I like that you even included the actual poem in your blog, it gives us readers an idea of the topic. I also like that you put a photo of a starfish on your blog, gives it a little bit of spice, you know?
Hey Annneleise,
ReplyDeleteI really like how detailed your post is. I like how you included the whole Starfish poem in your post to expand your reader's knowledge background about the context of your post is about. What you could improve on is to maybe erase the unnecessary empty spaces between elements (but it's not necessary though). Other than that please put more information along your answers. Have a nice day.
Hello
ReplyDeleteNice blogpost, maybe add more information and an introduction.
Hi there Anneleise,
ReplyDeleteI really like how detailed you made this blog post. All the information that you have included made it easy to understand the message of the Poem. Maybe you could add an introduction next time?
Anyways, well done! :)