Adrift
Once upon time I was in the beautiful blue, lovely sky. The clouds were soft and fluffy like sheeps wool. I was living in my house on top of a blue ginormous whale. I was just staring out of my window, being very bored, then something appeared through my eyes, flying in the air and it was my friend. His name is Kevin and he is 12 years old, he came down with his cool flying machine and landed really hard on the ground.
So I ran and helped him up and looked at him to see if he’s going to talk to me and he didn’t so he was rude. After him being rude, I heard a loud noise and it made my eardrums hurt and now when he heard the loud noise, he flicked his goggles on and flew away. When he flew away I felt really sad so I went inside my house and looked at my dirty floor. Until I saw my friend flying back to where I am and gave me this hook, but yet I didn’t know what to do with it.
I walked towards it and picked it up and used my brain and thought where it’s going to go, but it glide off my hand and I had to run after it. And I caught it and hooked it around the tree. After hooking the hook together with the tree I went to half of the edge and smiled and now he’s moving with me but in his own house.
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