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Friday, August 4, 2017

The mean birds


The mean birds

One fresh normal day, arrived a little bluebird on the electricity wire lines. The little bluebird arrived, and shook its fur to get comfortable, then another bluebird arrived and yawned the same time as he moved his arms, he yawned and hit the other bird in the face on accident and nearly at the eye. So he shoved him to the side and yelled at his face and stepped away.


Until another bird arrived when he stepped away and budget into to him and started an another argue again, so it’s going to repeat over and over again when other birds are going to arrive. They all were arguing and pushing and then finally this big different shaped bird came and stopped the arguing so it won’t go for long. Anyway the big bird waved at them in a very polite way. All the little birds got a fright, and there faces were huge. After they’re gotten a fright, they started making fun of him but all he wanted was friends.


When the big bird waved at the little birds, they moved away from him and talked in each other's ears about him. But he flew between them and they were heading down to the ground because the big bird was heavy. The little birds slid down to the big bird like they were cuddling him, but yet one little bird bit the big bird on its waist and he fell and hanged down with his feet still grabbed on the electricity wire lines.


The 2 little birds were peaking on the big birds toes so he can fall off, one little bird looked down and got scared because he saw that there going to blast off up into the sky, so that bird told the others. The others were freaking out when the bird told them, and they hurried and told the 2 birds to look down and they blast off into the sky when they stopped peaking.


After they blasting off, they were all not covered in fur so they were bold and un fury. When they were bold and un fury the big bird was laughing non stop, now the little birds were embarrassed and hid behind the big bird.

2 comments:

  1. Hey Anneleise, i really like you're story its really interspersing and cool. keep it up.

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  2. Hi Anneleise, I like when described how the bird arrived to the electricity wire line.keep the good work up.

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