Today period three with Mrs Hastie, we were doing the 300 word challenge. We got a choice about what we were going to write about and I chose to write about my friends 13th birthday that happened recently in the past.
Here is my writing:
Friends Birthday
On October the 18th, on a Friday, it was a very exciting day for me. It was my friend Keyana’s 13th birthday party but her real birthday was on Monday the 21st. She had invited me to her house for her birthday and I was so thrilled and happy that she had invited me. She was going on everyday about what she was going to do on her birthday, and she also told me who she was going to invite. She invited her cousin Jean and our other friends Mikayla and Chloe and that was when I boosted out of excitement.
On that night, we all meet up at her house and surprised her with our presents we got her,
that’s when I had just realized I have forgotten about a present. After giving her our presents,
we went out to our first event bowling, which was on the other side of town.
We all headed to bowling and started playing, I was so elevated.
As the night goes on at bowling, I was coming last, like I always am,
and the others were ahead of me.
that’s when I had just realized I have forgotten about a present. After giving her our presents,
we went out to our first event bowling, which was on the other side of town.
We all headed to bowling and started playing, I was so elevated.
As the night goes on at bowling, I was coming last, like I always am,
and the others were ahead of me.
Later after bowling, we went to the time zone area where they have made some
better touches and qualities to it,
and played some of the new games and won a huge amount of tickets
for some awesome prizes. As the time went by,
it was time to go back home for dinner, we had four boxes of pizza,
Ham and cheese, two classic cheese and the
Hawaiian pizza with pineapple and some garlic bread.
better touches and qualities to it,
and played some of the new games and won a huge amount of tickets
for some awesome prizes. As the time went by,
it was time to go back home for dinner, we had four boxes of pizza,
Ham and cheese, two classic cheese and the
Hawaiian pizza with pineapple and some garlic bread.
After eating dinner, we got changed into our pj’s and went and laid in
bed and watched a horror movies on Netflix, we watched IT2.
We also had some back up snacks while lying in bed such as, 2 blocks of chocolate,
2 packets of lollies and 2 fizzy drinks. It was one of the most enjoyable sleepovers
I’ve ever been too.
bed and watched a horror movies on Netflix, we watched IT2.
We also had some back up snacks while lying in bed such as, 2 blocks of chocolate,
2 packets of lollies and 2 fizzy drinks. It was one of the most enjoyable sleepovers
I’ve ever been too.
It was a very considerable time spending time with my friends and with Keyana
for her birthday and I enjoyed every part of it. It was also a really great opportunity
to be invited to her birthday and I am glad she chose me to come and celebrate with her.
for her birthday and I enjoyed every part of it. It was also a really great opportunity
to be invited to her birthday and I am glad she chose me to come and celebrate with her.
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