Alma
One cold snowy day in a small narrow village, everyone is keeping warm in their houses with their hot flaming fire on. I was a 6 year old girl skipping along the narrow village going to write my name on the green board. I was going to write my name on the green board because I know when I’m over 4 years old, I can write my name on the green board.
I wrote my name, my light green eyes spotted a doll in a random shop. So I went to the window and looked at the doll. It was wearing the same clothes as me. I was surprised. When I looked up, the doll disappeared so I tried looking for it. I went right to the door and found her, I pulled the door handle but it was locked, I was angry, so I threw a snowball hard at the door.
After trying and trying and trying, I walked away angry sliding my hand on the wall. Then magically I heard the squeak from the door and it opened half way. I twirled around and ran to the door, I opened it wide and went inside. After that I started looking at the other dolls while I walked in then I saw the doll just like me and reached my hand to it, but yet I stepped on a toy on accident. I picked the toy up and set it free.
When I set the toy free, I went to look on the table and the doll was not there, I was very surprised. I found the doll on the shelf, I went to the shelf and climbed on the couch and bit my glove off and touched the doll and it grabbed me and made me inside the doll, so now i’m the doll. There was another doll twirling up and that’s the doll who another person comes and gets grabbed inside.
Hi Anneleise,
ReplyDeleteI like when you describe how she went down the snowy road and how you
said she was skipping down the road.its a good writing you have keep up the good work.