I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Anneleise, I like your poster a lot,one of the reason that I really like it is because it's on the point; and it really tells me the information that I came for. I really like your small Chromebook drawing too. but maybe next time if you're doing something like this again maybe you could put more drawing and design it a bit more, and also maybe you could put more information down; because I think that it lacks it. But any way, a side from those tiny improvements, that was a really great DLO.
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Hi Anneleise,
ReplyDeleteI like your poster a lot,one of the reason that I really like it is because it's on the point; and it really tells me the information that I came for. I really like your small Chromebook drawing too. but maybe next time if you're doing something like this again maybe you could put more drawing and design it a bit more, and also maybe you could put more information down; because I think that it lacks it. But any way, a side from those tiny improvements, that was a really great DLO.