I went out the door and ran to Stirling Sports house. I knocked on her door and waited until she let me in. Stirling Sports had finally answered and we started watching Youtube on her Tv and filmed some TikToks/Musically's. After that it was 4:20, we went outside and played a couple of games of Netball, Stirling Sports had 23 points and I only had 9. She was way a head of me.
Later on that day, it was 5:00. I said bye to Stirling Sports and said "see you tomorrow at school". I left to go home and had a shower. I put on my pyjamas and got comfortable and warm. I went and had dinner with my whole family and we had Pasta bake, it was delicious. After dinner, I went and brushed my teeth and grabbed my phone. I lied in bed with my phone and waited until I felt sleepy. I said good night to my family. The End
Here is a link to a video for you to watch about creative writing about shoes - The video
Hi Anneleise, This writing is amazing. I really like how you said you're parents name in you're story. I really like how you explain the time and I like how you said After that it was 4:20, we went outside and played a couple of games of Netball, Stirling Sports had 23 points and I only had 9. She was way a head of me. I really enjoyed reading this blog post but keep up the great work Annelsie:)
ReplyDeleteHi Anneleise, I really did enjoy reading this post. I think that it is better then mine. i didn't think about that idea for a shoe. It is actually really enjoyable to read because it tells people your almost daily routine of the day like coming home, going to a friends house, having a shower, having tea, brushing your teeth and then going to sleep. If you added on to the next day it may have been more interesting to read again.
ReplyDeleteWhy didn't you add onto the next day?