In this post, I have written a Sensory Language Paragraph describing a scene or picture, using the five senses. (Touch, Smell, Taste, Hear and Sight) We weren't allowed to use the words saw, heard, smelled, tasted, felt. I wrote about the following picture above and I hope you like it.
Sensory Language Paragraph:
The amount of warmth flowing in the air, lingered in the room, made me witness the sound of quietness. As I observed the moving fingers of students, clattering the keys of their Chromebooks. An revolting rush of flavour of the hot air, hit in my mouth giving me a nauseous feeling of sickness in the stomach. The scent of fresh air as the teacher opens the windows, blow against my face allowing me to breath.
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